| Basketball is my favourite! |
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作者：佚名 文章来源：英语辅导报
点击数： 更新时间：2008-8-20 10:05:20 |
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| I have a great variety of hobbies, of which basketball is my favourite. I like it because it's so exciting and can make us energetic. The basketball game is no more men's patent nowadays. There're also lots of wonderful women players! I began to play basketball when I was a student in the primary school. I like this kind of sport and I have a dream that I will be a basketball star in the future. Basketball is fun. My favourite team is ‘San Antonio Spurs (圣安东尼奥马剌队)’! I always copy their actions. I play the game in my school. I like to use the fast attack and the ‘hook shot’. Every night I should watch CCTV 5! I learn quite a few actions from the TV. Now I'm very good at it and become the master-sportsman in my school team.
I love Yao Ming a lot. I think he's one of the best basketball players, not only in China but also all over the world. He is Chinese and plays for the NBA now. NBA is my favourite. I hope Yao Ming will lead Chinese basketball team to victory in the 2008 Olympic Games. Michael Jordan is also my idol. He is widely considered as basketball's best player, and becomes known as Air Jordan.
教师评语：这是一篇简介basketball的习作，中心明确，详略得当，层次分明，较生动地叙说了小作者热爱此项运动的理由及对两名世界级著名球员的喜爱，读后有种栩栩如生的感觉。除去少数词句尚需精炼外，本文应算是一篇佳作，值得学习。
江西省泰和县禾市中学八年级二班 蒋苏虹
指导教师：李守锡 |
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