| A Busy Day |
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作者：佚名 文章来源：英语辅导报
点击数： 更新时间：2008-7-24 14:37:25 |
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| It was Sunday. It was sunny and cool. In the morning, I did my homework. Then I went shopping with my mother.
In the afternoon, I visited my grandmother. I helped her clean the house. In the evening, I watched TV and listened to music. Then I went to sleep at 9 p.m..
What a busy day! But I was happy. It was funny！
广东省江门市福泉奥林匹克学校 吴夏君
指导教师：林丽春
点评台：吴夏君同学刚学习完一般过去时，就写下了A Busy Day这篇文章。小作者按时间顺序简单地介绍了她是如何有意义地度过一天的假期生活的，语言简洁，用词恰当。如果能针对某项印象特别深刻的活动进行描写叙述，如怎样帮奶奶打扫房间等，相信这篇文章会更充实。希望同学们也能像小作者一样合理地安排好双休日的活动，过有意义而又愉快的假日。 |
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