| A Happy Day |
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作者：佚名 文章来源：英语辅导报
点击数： 更新时间：2008-8-26 14:03:38 |
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| Today, I'm very happy. I go to the park after breakfast.
It's a sunny day. The sky is bright and blue. The grass is green. The sun is shining. The birds are singing and I'm singing, too. When I get to the park, I see some girls playing games, and some boys playing basketball. I join in the games. We play very happily. Then I have lunch with my friends.
We have a good time. What a happy day it is!
教师点评：
这篇习作的小作者凭借自己的细致观察和亲身感受，描绘出了明朗的天空、嫩绿的小草以及和小朋友游戏的心情。较好地运用了所学的知识，表达了热爱生活的情感。希望继续努力哦！
黑龙江省哈尔滨市和兴小学 赵天琪
指导教师: 张任静 |
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