| I am good at doing work |
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作者：佚名 文章来源：英语辅导报
点击数： 更新时间：2008-8-25 9:54:10 |
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| I am a hard-working girl. I get up early at home every Sunday morning, I clean my bedroom first. After I finish my homework, my mother teaches me how to cook food. My mother and I often cook food together. I am good at cooking. After meals, I often wash dishes. I usually help my mum wash windows. We wash the windows first. Next, we clean the windows. My mother smiles and says, “ You are very good.” I am very happy.
In school, I often sweep the floor. Look at the floor. It's very clean. Sometimes I help Jiang Xuan clean the blackboard. It's great fun. There is a lot of dust, but I am happy to do it.
Working makes me happy.
【所获奖项】全国小学生英语作文大赛一等奖
【评委点评】语言流畅，层次分明。不足之处在于有些连接词的使用不恰当，例如：“We wash the windows first. Next, we clean the windows.”应改为“We wash the windows first, then we clean the windows.”小作者要继续努力。
江苏省扬州市邗江实验学校 六年一班 张 陶
指导教师： 刘美林 |
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