在写人物活动或日常起居的作文时，我们要注意下面的几个问题：

    1. 时态与人称

    如果是写某人物现阶段的活动或起居情况的话，我们要采用一般现在时。而且，主语为第三人称单数时，谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式。

    2. 频度副词的运用

    恰当地运用频度副词（如：sometimes / often / usually / never等）会使你的作文更加完美，但不是每个句子都一定要用上这些词。

    3. 要突出人物特点

    在写人物活动，尤其是日常起居情况时，我们不要像记流水帐那样一一俱细，要把能突出人物特点的略做突出。哪怕只有一两句，也能为你的作文增色不少。

    范文：

My Busy Father

    My father is a doctor. He is busy every day.

    He gets up at six every morning. After sports, he usually has milk, eggs and bread for breakfast. Sometimes he has no time to have breakfast. He goes to work by bus at about 7:00. He works hard all day. The patients(病人) like him very much. Every day, he gets home very late. After a busy day, he likes to lie on the sofa and watch TV.  Sometimes he goes to see the patients in the evening. He goes to bed late every night.

    He is so busy. I really love him.